Questionnaire/Feedback on Prelim Task

I produced a questionnaire with questions on my prelim task asking a total of 5 people what they liked and disliked. After I gathered a decent amount of feedback I was then able to read and think about how I could improve when it came to filming my short film.

1. What did you like about "A Day in the Life of Feet"

Nathalie - I liked the whole concept of different people walking with different shoes but the way you've put it all together is as though it's one person, I think it's really clever.

Louise - The different camera angles.

Paige - I liked how you track the shoes, it makes me feel really engaged in what is happening.

Ellie - The close ups of the shoes and how you used different people rather than just having one person.

George - I like the use of different kind of shoes, so you've got a range of girls black school shoes to fashionable trainers. Gives a wide variety attracting a wide audience of both genres.

2. What did you dislike, how would you improve it?

Nathalie - I didn't think quality of it all was that good, perhaps you were limited with equipment but I would perhaps invest in a decent camera. 

Louise - Some of the shots were shaky, for instance when the actor was walking down the stairs it looked like you struggled to move the camera along with her. I would maybe get better equipment or if not, change the idea so you don't have to deal with these problems.

Paige - I thought the variety of shoes wasn't equal. At the beginning we see girls school shoes repeatedly, and the suddenly at the end there's trainers. Maybe spread them out so you have trainers, school she's, trainers... etc

Ellie - I think the quality of it is very poor, I would get better equipment so it looks more professional.

George - I would work on the structure, as it is unclear what you're trying to get across. I would have the actor starting off somewhere and then working their way to a football game, that way you have a completely different range of shoes.

General feedback...

"The whole concept of the feet is a really good idea, I would've never have thought of that myself! The quality isn't great but I know you were limited to what the school has to offer"

"I like the use of the sound of the school bell ringing as the students walk into school, however I feel that it needs a song playing whilst the people are walking to make it more rememberable."

"The camera is a bit all over the place and the shot is wonky which prevents it from looking professional"

As I was limited to as what I could ask my target audience due to the product being only a minute long, there wasn't much to work on. However, I have asked the main question, what is good and how I could improve so now I can put these into good use when it comes to filming my short film enabling me to produce a more professional looking film.