This is my second draft and I feel that I have made a huge improvement. After processing my audiences feedback on my previous draft, I can now say that I have taken into account what they have said and have tried to satisfy their needs. Firstly, I was told that my film review was lacking in information and text as a whole and that it looked rather plain and boring. To prevent this I have added a quote to my primary image at the top. I did this because in my last draft I felt as though if someone was to look at it, they wouldn't know what is it about by looking at what is there as it was very limited before. Now, The images give off a lot more, for example, I have added the quote "pulling someone down will never help you reach the top" as I feel that it is very inspirational. For my target audience, being someone that may have or still are experiencing bullying being the victim was to read this, i feel as though they would know straight away what it is about and that they may relate to the quote themselves as though it is addressing them. However, the font this time is sans serif, black with a white highlighting background. I decided to have separate from the rest because I feel that it is very important as it is a inspiring and memorable quote. I have also added "review" sections so my audience, target or oppositional can see what other people have said about it. Lastly, everything else I have kept the same because beforehand I had a series of positive feedback, however, I still feel there's room for improvement.
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