Film Review Final Draft

This is my final film review. From before I felt as though I still had a lot more to offer and that there was still a lot of black spaces that I needed to fill. Firstly, applying to the feedback about the "plain border" I decided to add a green stripe at the top, grey and block stripes along the sides and bottom and an arrow shape pointing towards my article in the bottom, left hand corner. With these borders I now feel satisfied that i have managed to add enough colour around the side to make it seem much more livelier attracting more of an audience. Below the border at the bottomI have also added page numbers, this is because this is very essential information that every magazine article should have, therefore I included it. I kept the font the same for my page numbers to reinforce the house style of my products. Secondly, I the felt as though the space at the bottom on the right was very bare, so to prevent this I added a bright green stripe, keeping with my colour scheme, to make it seem as though there was a lot more going on. I then overlapped sell lines over the top of the green box, I used white and blacks fonts that contrasts with the green. Furthermore, I decided to include a sell line because I felt that my film review lacked in something really interesting, so I added information that implies that if you sign up to a certain website, you are able to seen "never seen before footage" from behind the scenes. I did this because, after doing my primary research for my short film and it's film review, I realised that behind the scene interviews and exclusive footage is really significant as it is very interesting for the audience to see especially if they are fans and are really keen on the main product, in this case my short film. To conclude, I feel that overall  have produced a much more sophisticated and professional product compared to my first film revue draft. Also,  I have learnt that my audience feedback is really important and plays a big part when making my film review as without the criticism I wouldn't have been able to correct myself and improve in some areas.