Feedback on Short Film

I left my short film on the screen of the Mac I was using and everyone in my class watched it and below is some of the feedback. I felt as though gathering feedback and criticism from people in my class rather than my close friends gave me more of a reliable and truthful feedback to take in and work on.

"The music used fits really well and the opening shots are really effective due to their high quality. Really good range of camera angles and effects of the text helps build a sense of variety."

"I like the music in the background as it suits the theme of this film. The music the  audience in suspense as the story unfolds. I like the use of the tracking shots, it gives this short film a professional feel."

"Very well edited, the shots were well constructed and flow together nicely. I love the concept of the character ageing. I think you've portrayed this very well by keeping similar clothes/location. The music fits well, well done."

"I like title and how it comes up, however, maybe some narrating at the beginning although it is also effective how it is already."

"The end is slightly confusing, could make it a little clearer. The camera shots and music all work really well together and there is a clear symbolisation of the flash backs."

"I like the use of music, especially the heartbeat at the end."

"Perhaps use a quick cross fade between actresses"