CHANGE in plot/script

NINA

~Scene 1~ Nina is sat on her bed watching TV when she suddenly switches the TV off and looks out of the window, which leads on to the flashback 

*transition to indicate flashback*



~Scene 2~ Walking along the street with cheat cuts for change of clothing of young Nina with voice over

Voiceover:  The sun comes up every morning, just like I walk along this street every morning. I am loveable. I am wanted, and that glimmer of sunlight that essence of nature. The sun, it is as bright as a scared child's night light. That's what makes all the difference, it not only gives me hope but, it tells me that someday, my summer will come.

*Happy flashback*



~Scene 3~ Flashback of young Nina playing in the park with her friends (fuzzy filter to establish that it is a flashback)

Friends and Nina:  Singing ring a ring of roses with high pitched laughter



~Scene 4~ Back to the street but Nina is dressed slightly more maturely to look older



Voiceover: It all comes back. Every word, every hurt, every moment. How could you ever understand where I come from? You can not hear or see or feel. You won't remember my story because you haven't walked my path, you haven't seen what my eyes have seen. My past defines me so this is who I am, I am
Unseen
Unheard
Unwanted
That is what I am, if even I am anything

*Slightly sadder flashback*



~Scene 5~ A flashback to the park again but this time Nina is sitting on her own and her so called "friends" are leaving her/making fun of her. (over the shoulder shot of Nina of the swing and friends in the distance)

(Sad, quiet music?)



~Scene 6~ Back to the street but now Nina is much older but she is still walking, this emphasises how her life is very repetitive.

Voiceover:  I still don't understand the purpose of my life, the purpose of my footsteps walking the earth everyday. My existence is invisible. In the end what we regret most is the chances we never took, but how can I take a chance if those chances are improbable, or an illusion to my eye.

*flashback*



~Scene 7~ Final flashback to Nina being picked up from school by her mother.



~Scene 8~  back to Nina on the street, she's about to approach her house, she receives a number of hurtful texts (texts appear on screen) and as the last text reads "turn around go on, do it i dare ya" Nina slowly turns her head to see what is behind her...




~Scene 9~ As she turns round if flashes forwards to Nina in her bedroom again like at the beginning before we get to see who was behind her. There is a close up of her eye wide open and in shock.

~END~


I changed my script and plot due to time and going over, I also felt as though my plot was a bit too confusing with a load of different character within a short amount of time, therefore, I decreased the number of characters also enabling me to keep within the time limit.